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My interprentation of Veldin
InfernoXDragonDate: Friday, 2010-10-22, 5:53 PM | Message # 1
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Go HERE for the current thread for this series of art. ;)

I have been working on this piece of art for a very long time. I would appriciate it if people could come by and give their opinion on it. Maybe tell me what I could improve etc.

My plan is to make a drawing of every planet in the Ratchet franchise so finishing those would be very far away. This is the first of the many planets: Veldin, which takes place on Kyzil Plateau.

I will also show you the process of this art.

Another thing: I have been making remixes of RAC Music from January to June 2010, but haven't released Ratchet and Clank 1 ever since. Well it will come, it is around 120 files with allot of extra remixes for other existing albums which is improved. But because of school and lot's of exams I won't have time for any of this. I am glad that I could at least finish this drawing.

Look critically at it and I will try to improve it.

So that was my drawing but it had allot of developments too. As an example: I had problems with the atmosphere of Veldin and I still think the end result ain't quite an accomplishment. Here you can see how the proces went from sketch to final design and the beta atmospheres.

Fase 1 - Rough Sketch:

Fase 2 - Clear Version:

Fase 3 - Beta Atmosphere 1:

Fase 3 - Beta Atmosphere 2:

I am looking forward to your responses.

Inferno Dragon

EDIT: Images resized.
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Message edited by InfernoXDragon - Friday, 2010-10-22, 5:53 PM
 
TheJakandDaxterDate: Friday, 2010-10-22, 7:05 PM | Message # 2
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Wow... That is incredible! I'm not sure if there is anything that needs changed/fixed! Great work! I can not wait to see your other drawings... biggrin :P biggrin wink smile


 
OJJ09874Date: Saturday, 2010-10-23, 1:28 AM | Message # 3
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If your not doing UYA in which you go the same place I think you should put that biodome in the background
 
InfernoXDragonDate: Saturday, 2010-10-23, 3:37 AM | Message # 4
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As I said, I will make drawings of every planet in the franchise. This will take a long time, and eventualy I will make a a drawing of UYA's Veldin and the last level of Ratchet and Clank 1 Veldin, which is under invasion and in a different time setting [at night]. I will make a start with my new drawing which is Novalis -> Aridia -> Metropolis.

I can't wait to do Metropolis since I love to draw cities, I didn't like to draw Veldin but I think it ended out pretty good.



 
ZonifiedDate: Saturday, 2010-10-23, 3:44 AM | Message # 5
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Wow, this is really impressive. smile I couldn't find many problems besides very minor details (you wouldn't see these unless you are looking for them). Nice job!

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KillerKyDate: Saturday, 2010-10-23, 9:10 AM | Message # 6
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very nice. i almost don't believe you made them. what are you using? are those CGIs or paints?

 
TOY_ROBOTDate: Saturday, 2010-10-23, 10:20 AM | Message # 7
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Wow! That is really great! Amazing job! happy


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InfernoXDragonDate: Saturday, 2010-10-23, 12:24 PM | Message # 8
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Thanks for the comments :D, I thought everybody would hate the art because I am not satisfied at some point but I wouldn't know what. I am going to start on Novalis right now.

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very nice. i almost don't believe you made them. what are you using? are those CGIs or paints?

This is CGI. If it was painting then it would be beautiful indeed :P



 
DangergoppelDate: Saturday, 2010-10-23, 5:45 PM | Message # 9
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Sweet! biggrin
This so makes me want to go play R&C1 again...

 
TheJakandDaxterDate: Sunday, 2010-10-24, 1:03 AM | Message # 10
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Quote (Dangergoppel)
This so makes me want to go play R&C1 again...

Same! :P


 
TheJakandDaxterDate: Saturday, 2011-01-01, 7:42 PM | Message # 11
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Go HERE for the current thread for this series of art. wink


 
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